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SteelersGirlTN7
08-06-2007, 10:03 PM
Ok y'all, well the Steelers have played a game, so it's time for a poem. I decided to honor Mike Tomlin's first game as head coach! Can't wait for the new season!


Saints vs Steelers in the Hall Of Fame Game
Steelers have a new coach - Mike Tomlin is his name

Last season didn't turn out quite like we all hoped
We ended at .500 and we all coped

So much happened - though it could have been worse
Defending a Superbowl seems to be a curse

But that's over now - it's the start of the Steelers 75th year
I know I'm glad the season is almost here

Some preseason games give us a glimpse of what's ahead
We've got a Black and Gold hunger that needs to be fed

Ben helped us score quickly - it didn't take long
And over the night - not much went wrong

It's only preseason so it doesn't mean much
The details don't matter like stats and scores and such

So it's usually for the real season I save my rhyme
But I had to give the new coach some time

Tomlin's debut has been quite a show
Watch out NFL! The Steelers are back! UH OH!!

Jman
08-06-2007, 10:06 PM
This should be framed and hung!

steelpride12
08-06-2007, 10:41 PM
Wow man great stuff that was awesome hah!

SteelCityMan786
08-06-2007, 10:53 PM
Great work. SteelersGirlTN7 is the official game poet of Steelers Fever. She has created a lot of other great works.

RoethlisBURGHer
08-06-2007, 11:49 PM
I think I am going to frame that poem.

Seriously,you should send these to the Steelers,they might publish them in the Steelers Digest or something.

BettisFan
08-06-2007, 11:52 PM
are u a professional poet ur amazing

SteelersGirlTN7
08-07-2007, 12:35 AM
are u a professional poet ur amazing

Thank you to all!! It's great to have a season to write about again!!

As for ParkerFan's question- no, not professional, just use my little bit of creativity to write about something I live and breathe - Steelers football!! :-)


Here's the address of a Myspace blog I made with my previous poems for anyone who wasn't around to see them :-)

http://blog.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=blog.ListAll&friendID=217187530

qbvision.com
08-07-2007, 01:46 AM
OK...this was nice....let me try!!!

2 years ago a sweet moment passed
it was the Steelers winning the super bowl, kicking ass
a year has passed and still we have that taste
now a new era has started with a new face
his name is Tomlin, some had doubts
the team has played and still conducting try outs
but sincerely as a Steelers fan I must say
after the first game, i cant wait for another game day
to see them Steelers kicking ass once more
them Steelers we do certainly adore!

GO STEELERS!!!! Please support another Die Hard Fan and post to my blog. qbvision.com/blog

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SteelFist
08-07-2007, 09:18 AM
Thank you to all!! It's great to have a season to write about again!!

As for ParkerFan's question- no, not professional, just use my little bit of creativity to write about something I live and breathe - Steelers football!! :-)


Here's the address of a Myspace blog I made with my previous poems for anyone who wasn't around to see them :-)



Wow! Good Stuff!!

SteelerFanInCA
08-07-2007, 02:52 PM
Well said, once again.

steelpride12
08-07-2007, 02:55 PM
OK...this was nice....let me try!!!

2 years ago a sweet moment passed
it was the Steelers winning the super bowl, kicking ass
a year has passed and still we have that taste
now a new era has started with a new face
his name is Tomlin, some had doubts
the team has played and still conducting try outs
but sincerely as a Steelers fan I must say
after the first game, i cant wait for another game day
to see them Steelers kicking ass once more
them Steelers we do certainly adore!

GO STEELERS!!!! Please support another Die Hard Fan and post to my blog. qbvision.com/blog

thanks :tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::t t02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt02::tt0 2::tt02:

Nice!!!:tt02: