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SteelersGirlTN7
06-16-2006, 12:53 AM
yeah, I even do this in the offseason... although I could have lived without this particular "inspiration".... thought I'd share with y'all! :-)

On one regular day in the middle of June
Something terrible happened just before noon

On his way to practice like many times before
An ordinary trip it would be no more

Ben was on his motorcycle - helmet-less no doubt
Something he was always adamant about

You're not invincible - except maybe on the field
Look what happens when a car fails to yield

The scene of the crash was a horrible ugly sight
We all prayed for you as day turned into night

And not just Steeler fans but people around the nation
Glued to their TVs and computers for just a little information

Time went by and we watched and we waited
Outside the hospital some local fans even tailgated

You had luck on your side that day - that goes without saying
Helped out a little by a whole lot of praying

When you come back is something only time will tell
All that really matters, Ben, is that you get well

Having you back for the season - sure nothing would be greater
But worry about your health now - football can come later

You're just getting started and look what you have done
You've helped make the last 2 years as Steelers fans fun

We're going to support our team no matter what
Steeler Nation loves you Ben - but

Next time around - if and when
You ever decide to ride a bike again

Put on that helmet - that is the moral of this rhyme
We want you around for a long, long time!

(and not just as a Steeler! Alive :-)


GET WELL SOON BEN!!!

Prosdo
06-16-2006, 12:55 AM
Very nice job as always!

shimmysteelerfan
06-16-2006, 02:56 AM
that is awesome! good work, its crazy how you make words flow together. reps to you.

Ohio Steeler
06-16-2006, 05:37 AM
very nice work, rep points your way for that

BlacknGold Bleeder
06-16-2006, 07:10 AM
Awesome as always !!!

steelersgirl86
06-16-2006, 08:37 AM
another amazing job...:bouncy:

blackngoldbaby
06-16-2006, 12:31 PM
that is great poem glad u could share it with us!:bouncy:

SteelerFanInCA
06-16-2006, 12:51 PM
Great job as always.

SteelersGirlTN7
06-16-2006, 02:05 PM
Thanks everyone :-)

LuckyNumber7
06-16-2006, 03:07 PM
Very, very well done

SteelerzGirl
06-17-2006, 08:53 AM
Awesome poem once again, Queenie...(lol)! :smile:

SteelersGirlTN7
06-18-2006, 08:18 PM
Awesome poem once again, Queenie...(lol)! :smile:

Thanks .. lol


And thanks, too for forwarding that PM from Lauren. Unfortunately, I'm not able to PM her. I haven't been able to send or respond to PMs in an age on here.

Anyway, Lauren (Steelers_Chica6) - it's cool if you use it - it's no problem. I post them here to share w/ my fellow Steelers fans! :-)

~Michele~

SteelerzGirl
06-18-2006, 08:20 PM
Thanks .. lol


And thanks, too for forwarding that PM from Lauren. Unfortunately, I'm not able to PM her. I haven't been able to send or respond to PMs in an age on here.

Anyway, Lauren (Steelers_Chica6) - it's cool if you use it - it's no problem. I post them here to share w/ my fellow Steelers fans! :-)

~Michele~

No problem, Michele. I was happy to help the two of you. :smile:

klick81
06-18-2006, 11:36 PM
VERY nice poem! VERY nice :)

section514
06-18-2006, 11:37 PM
nice poem, but I got lost on the rhyming scheme...is there supposed to be me a rhyming pattern and is it supposed to follow some type of pentamater (sp)??

Steelers_chica6
07-03-2006, 09:02 PM
Okay Thanks!!! Great poem by the way!!!

SteelShooter
07-04-2006, 03:29 AM
Sweeeeet!

Reps coming your way Girl!

clevestinks
07-04-2006, 09:05 AM
Awesome once again. Wish you could stop by more often

HometownGal
07-04-2006, 09:21 AM
Your poem is a work of art and I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks for sharing. :smile: Rep coming your way. :cool:

nicesteel4life
07-04-2006, 11:38 AM
Nice....... Very Nice! Enjoyed reading...Rep points your way!

slashsteel
07-04-2006, 12:19 PM
Always good to see a quality poem, nice. :)

slashsteel
07-04-2006, 12:22 PM
Roses are red
Violets arn't blue I bet
when your face meets a windshield
you better be wearin a helmet

Ok so I am not a poet. lol

Elvis
07-04-2006, 06:50 PM
Nice poem and I hope that Big Ben learns from his mistake and hopefuly Santonio will also..God Bless
Elvis

SteelersGirlTN7
07-05-2006, 09:25 PM
Awesome once again. Wish you could stop by more often

Aww thanks, Cleve! I read the messages every so often.. just dont post a lot.
You can bet when the season comes around Ill definitely be around more often! Are we there yet? LOL

Also, thanks everyone for all the complimentary words :-)

~Michele~